(Last Night Dream!)
In my dream, I saw you dressed in white.Your smile warmed our place.
Every thing surrounded us was white.
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a nice narrative verses..well done..keep on writing.. Ency Bearis
Good start, dear Hassan Almadlouh. I liked the poetic phrase 'You’ll find my tears are yours'.Unusual, but this is poetry.Go ahead: read, try, test, retry your poems. Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded
You are very fortunate to find someone like that. It's great to have lovely dreams. But it's better to live in reality. So, don't just dream. Try to concretize your dreams into reality. Wish you all the best!