Thursday, September 25, 2008

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(Last Night Dream!)

In my dream, I saw you dressed in white.Your smile warmed our place.
Every thing surrounded us was white.
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Hassan Almadlouh
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Eu Stress 25 September 2008

You are very fortunate to find someone like that. It's great to have lovely dreams. But it's better to live in reality. So, don't just dream. Try to concretize your dreams into reality. Wish you all the best!

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Ency Bearis 25 September 2008

a nice narrative verses..well done..keep on writing.. Ency Bearis

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Joseph Poewhit 25 September 2008

That is a very nice poem

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Good start, dear Hassan Almadlouh. I liked the poetic phrase 'You’ll find my tears are yours'.Unusual, but this is poetry.Go ahead: read, try, test, retry your poems. Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

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