Laughing Poem by Brittany Messersmith

Laughing

Rating: 4.0


you pushed me to the limitts
you laughed
you poked
you tore me to pieces
i'm not pretty
i'm not the best athlete
so you decided to...
laugh
poke
and tear
so I did the same
i laughed as i
tore at my skin
and poked them through my chest
i didnt see you smiling the day you heard the awful truth
so im guessing you're not laughing any more

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 24 August 2015

you're not laughing anymore; because of the truth was made bare! Nice work.

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