We All Fall Poem by Brittany Messersmith

We All Fall

Rating: 4.5


We all fall, sometimes
We all let ourselves down
Sometimes there nothings left to do but to live with what’s been done
You’re the only one who falls
I still believe in you and so does God
We all fail, sometimes
We all let someone down
But what you have to do is promise yourself is that you won’t fall again
I will still tell you that you can do it
I will stay by your side
I will always help you get back up
God and I will always believe in you
God is the one who believe in those of us who fall
We all fall
Sometimes you just want to give up
All you have to do is promise you will get back up and try again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Fischer 03 May 2007

Very nice...the ending was solid. I like the positive message in your poem to never give up and keep trying until you succeed. Nice work...top marks! -Michael

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