Lava Poem by Ahmed Kayes

Lava

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How helpless are the greatest creation of God,
the volcanoes are killing, burning and smashing them.
Does the greatest creation of God not have power
Over atomic energy, astronomy, hydrogen bomb,
along with drone, robotics, missiles, rockets?
The greatest creation of God; human being,
Could not make or manufacture the barricade
to stop the lava, to stop cyclone, or tsunami,
Human beings are so helpless. Even God is not
sending best protection to stop smashing civilization.
The human being could not win the heart of nature
But could build the temples, sanctuaries and churches
to pacify the Gods and Goddesses and artistic tomb.
Human beings are applying forces to drive humanity
But could not apply force to stop lava for saving their gravity.
Human beings are so helpless like my poetry.
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Monday, June 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: human condition
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 05 July 2018

true lines- The human...... could build the temples, sanctuaries and churches to pacify the Gods and Goddesses and artistic tomb ..are Gods and Goddesses really eager to human's worshiping! ! ! ! but human beings are not helpless cause in this earth human beings are only doer of everything and your poem is not also helpless cause - you've written But could not apply force to stop lava for saving their gravity yeah none can force to stop your gravity of POEM.

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Ahmed Kayes 20 July 2018

Cordial Thanks to you for your inspiring comments.

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 June 2018

The greatest creation of God; human being, Could not make or manufacture the barricade to stop the lava, to stop cyclone, or tsunami, Human beings are so helpless.- - a realization of human condition in reality....... thank u for this portrayal through this poem.. tony

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Ahmed Kayes 18 June 2018

Attainment. Cordial thanks to you for your comment. We can continue communication through the mail kayes1082@gmail.com or +88 01814 360 600.

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Muzahidul Reza 18 June 2018

Him, human beings are as helpless as; as foolish as to finish themselves, well done, come on writing, thanks for sharing the poem with us here in poemhunter,10

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Ahmed Kayes 18 June 2018

Good Wishes. Thanks for Inspiring comment. We can continue communication through the mail kayes1082@gmail.com or +88 01814 360 600.

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Ahmed Kayes 18 June 2018

Thanks for the inspiring comment. Good wishes. We can continue communication through the mail kayes1082@gmail.com or +88 01814 360 600.

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