Lava Fury Poem by Mellisa Salazar

Lava Fury

Rating: 5.0


lava flows and so does water

is there something that you’re after


you won’t find it here nor there

if you know you are love

you won’t even care


up and down and left and right

forever and ever you could fight


tired forever and eternally after

what you’re looking for is

laughter

Tuesday, March 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: choice,fear of self,fight,laughter,life,water
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mellisa Salazar 31 January 2018

Trying to find it

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Mellisa Salazar 31 January 2018

If you knew you were already the very thing you are seeking maybe you wouldn’t exhaust yourself

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Mellisa Salazar 31 January 2018

I meant love.

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Bri Edwards 13 January 2018

if you know you are love.............did you mean loved? i like the poem's flow, but it doesn't make (for me) complete sense. not that a poem HAS TO. i'd combine the last 5 lines into one stanza. laughter is a very good thing to seek, as long as one doesn't find it is often directed towards the 'seeker', .........in a bad way! bri :)

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Crystal Pierce 24 March 2015

Awesome sauce! This poem expressed love in a way that could help people understand.

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