Lava Fury Comments

Trying to find it

If you knew you were already the very thing you are seeking maybe you wouldn’t exhaust yourself

I meant love.

if you know you are love.............did you mean loved? i like the poem's flow, but it doesn't make (for me) complete sense. not that a poem HAS TO. i'd combine the last 5 lines into one stanza. laughter is a very good thing to seek, as long as one doesn't find it is often directed towards the 'seeker', .........in a bad way! bri :)

Awesome sauce! This poem expressed love in a way that could help people understand.