Tuesday, September 18, 2012

Learning About Love Comments

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When will I learn to forget?
It is so hard to just move on.
Your memory's etched in my head.
Even when forgetting seems so close,
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Kyra Carr
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Jason Kenzie 18 September 2012

Very sweet, I love the verse: When I look back on what we had, I'll only be able to smile.

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Chiisomo Soboya 18 September 2012

hey Kyra, the emotion was evident, , the passion was unimaginable and i truly -loved-liked it..

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Nurain Ali-balogun 18 September 2012

I hope you find relief someday, hopefully soon. This is a lot to bear alone but still, as a poet, I'd say it's a great, great write.

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Kelvin Owusu 18 September 2012

A nice piece, i enjoyed the back and fourth of the negatives and positives seem to have learned in piece, very well written

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Kyra Carr

Kyra Carr

Lafayette, Louisiana
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