Learning To Fly Poem by Julie Smith

Learning To Fly

Rating: 4.5


Hey, I hit a record high
Because of you I learned to fly
You made me live and gave me wings
Instead of chunky diamond rings

Up in the air behind the clouds
The sky is blue and without doubts
I know I will and have to fall
To save the greatest love of all

Flying alone is not fulfilling
For you I'd fall to the precipice of sinning
Descending from the highest height
To be with you before it's too late

Wednesday, March 1, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: falling,flying,love,positiveness,true love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written in the best of times. I saw my fall before it happened. Now it's maybe too late...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Jones 29 March 2017

Ratnakar said it perectly in his comment, i love that concept of giving wings, not diamonds rings, an outlook on life more precious that material belongings. beautiful poem, Thanks.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 01 March 2017

You made me live and gave me wings Instead of chunky diamond wings. Marvelous conceptualization coming out of positive approach. Thanks for sharing.

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