Forever Poem by Julie Smith

Forever

Rating: 4.8


City lights reflected by silver clouds
My brand new shoes on the dark, dusty pavement
Following the golden glow down the avenue
High trees, white walls and luxury villas
Marilyn and Daddy, you would be proud

The cold air heating up on my skin
The JFK hotel, promising decadence as I walk in
I didn't expect this to happen so soon
When yesterday you told me you'd be here in this city of mine
And I've been dreaming of this all my life

Slow steps, the hallway is plastered with pictures
Of high class people
The receptionists treating me like I'm one of them
Getting lost on the third floor
Ready for room 334

You look in my eyes while you talk to her
The lies, the betrayal, it don't bother you
This love is too good to deny it
Smoke fills the room
While you hang up and take my hand

I'll be your mistress just to have you around
In misdemeanor and intrusion
Our hearts are bound together
Double-cross, no condemnation
I'll be yours and you'll be mine forever

Monday, October 31, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: affair,affairs,amazing,betrayal,cheating,forbidden,forever,heart,hotel,infidelity
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A beautiful, perfect day and night. Stained luxury, secrets, lies and love. To be continued forever...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 30 March 2017

Betrayal! ! Facing life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 14 November 2016

A beautiful love poem julie I enjoyed it Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Seamus O Brian 07 November 2016

The reader is drawn along through the lobby, down the hall, into the door. Mesmerized. Do we want to know what is behind that door? Should we go any further? What will the future be like if the consequences are damned? Intriguing and compelling piece, Julie. Nicely done! :)

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Sarah Mkhonza 31 October 2016

I like this poem. I am compelled to say, you deserve better when the betrayal is revealed. Good poem. Thanks for writing it.

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