Leaving The Paradise Poem by shrutika kahale

Leaving The Paradise

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I remember entering a place when i was four,
smiling, curious, excited to start a new life,
after entering the smiles gradually turned to tears,
i no longer wanted to go there,
nothing seemed good enough anymore

slowly the situation changed and that place became my second home,
people there were placed in my heart,
around which the whole life revolves,
friends, teachers, everyone got so dear to me.
and the magical journey began,

we laughed, we cried, we tripped, we stood,
we enjoyed to the core!
teachers shaped our personality, blessed us with enormous knowledge.
it slowly turned to be our paradise.

later everyone smelled the danger of parting from this heaven,
again a new life was waiting for us all,
walking through those classrooms, cabins,
walking through my friends desks, became memories.
no more sleepy classes, no more pt lectures,
no more annual and sports meets,
no more falling over giggling with my friends over a stupid prank,
no more bollywood in the classes.

the class, bench, walls, fan, pond, premises,
the juniors, seniors, loving teachers,
the idiotic friends simply turned to memories,
which ended again the way we began- with tears.

growing apart wont change the fact that for years we grew side by side
our roots will always be tangled.

Sunday, April 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: school
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
everyone miss their school life, my school life was just extraordinary, i wrote these lines when i was missing my school terribly.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Sharma 11 July 2016

brilliant work, loved and liked

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 May 2016

Slowly the situation changed! Thanks for sharing.

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Shrutika Kahale 22 May 2016

thankyou edward for placing your comment.

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Shrutika Kahale 07 May 2016

thankyou so much for going through my work and appreciate it

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Halin Roche 26 April 2016

Missing the school days terribly... nice n emotional... thanks shrutika

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Shrutika Kahale 27 April 2016

yes, we enjoyed those days together, but it wont ever return!

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Akhil Raveendran 24 April 2016

Memories are dangerous things. You turn them over and over, until you know every touch and corner, but still you'll find an edge to cut you.” - Mark Lawrence my favorite quotation..

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Shrutika Kahale 24 April 2016

true, thankyou for reading

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 April 2016

You refresh my memory to my happy school life with this amazing poem. Thanks for sharing Shruti.

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Shrutika Kahale 24 April 2016

my pleasure, thankyou indeed

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