Claude Davis III

Rookie - 0 Points (10/12/1989)

Left In The Rain - Poem by Claude Davis III

You run away in the rain.
I feel like an ass.
My heart is in such pain.
If only I showed some class.

I keep going back to that day.
And I feel worse every time.
Your gone, but I will stay.
No use running from my crime.

I know I could still have you.
And it would only take a letter.
But I know that I am not true.
And that you deserve better.


Comments about Left In The Rain by Claude Davis III

  • Aldo Kraas (1/25/2007 8:18:00 PM)

    Yes what you are saying is I need to have respect towards others
    I agree that you need to do it
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  • Sierra M (8/5/2006 11:34:00 PM)

    This is a very powerful poem. *Sierra* (Report)Reply

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  • Duncan Wyllie (8/1/2006 5:33:00 PM)

    Powerful sentiments, so heart-felt and honest
    I love this
    A poem of real quality
    love duncan X
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  • Tailor BellTailor Bell (7/30/2006 3:02:00 AM)

    Close to my life, your poem has parked itself in my memory and stirs up my guilt. Powerfully delivered. -T. Bell (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 29, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 19, 2010


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