Let Down Poem by Ratha Hou

Let Down

Rating: 5.0


Why must i feel pain as i love you with all
Stuck here im trapped, trying to free myself
Lost in a pit of love or is it just lust
Opinions cause me to loose focus
A state of mind disoriented, flustered
I collapse, endearing the pain for what cause
Such deception i feel suddenly
Mountain of lies overrun all in its path
Led on by what appeared to be real, actually was a mirage
The images replaying in my head brings me happiness
But only to be shot down by a single voice
Unheard, i become frustrated, negative
Disgusted from a sight i wished to never invision
But my love for her keeps growing ascending to the stars

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Burger 17 October 2011

This is a beautiful poem which reminds me of my Jane poems. Reason being how you love the one you hate. THe poetry tecqunics are brillant and I love the poem. Keep it up

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Romeo Della Valle 17 October 2011

Speak your heart and mind aloud to her like you did in this powerful write! Don't be afraid! You will never know until you try! What have you to lose? But plenty to gain by knowing the truth because it will set you free to move on one way or another! 10+++ Great write! Keep inspiring the World with more such talented writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Ratha Hou

Ratha Hou

bridgeport, connecticut
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