Alicia Roseberry

Rookie (11/26/1992 / cincinnati)

**let Go, Let Go** - Poem by Alicia Roseberry

the words they say hurt,
life burns,
so hard to keep that razor,
away from my skin,
away from the scars,
the need to create new ones,
it grows by the minute,
so hard to control,
my aunts,
so worried,
of what i might do next,
i keep my will,
i throw the razor out the window,
i tell myself,
let go, let go,
dont do this,
you're not perfect,
you need to,
let go, let go,
of these feellings,
sit quietly and just,
let go, let go.


Comments about **let Go, Let Go** by Alicia Roseberry

  • (3/13/2010 11:49:00 AM)


    Alicia you are so amazing! ! ! I just cut myself and thanks to this knowing that there are other things to do and people have it worse than me and I have no reason to do this! I am here for you 100% of the way! I love this poem it is very real (Report) Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/2/2010 6:26:00 AM)


    the words they say hurt,
    life burns,
    so hard to keep that razor
    ,
    away from my skin,
    away from the scars, . to faced it bravely in any given situation.. let that things go from the mind....10

    read mine... go back.... visiting hell
    (Report) Reply

  • Hebert Logerie Sr. (8/9/2009 5:30:00 PM)


    Beautiful way to avoid the worst of any situation; let go, let go. (Report) Reply

  • (7/26/2009 3:47:00 AM)


    i love this poem. it really jump out of the page at me cuz ive been there and ive done that. i almost died from cuttin 2 year ago i dont cut anymore because life is precious. u have just got to get threw the hard stuff to ther to the good stuff. i enjoyed this poem. i know that adrenaline rush i was 16 years old 2 years ago. it didnt get better fast but i had to have time to heal. i felt alone because i was in cps where they take almost everything u love away. i think u should really read some of my poems and see my expirences with life. anyways read the poems called: hopes gone, and while i was in cps custody (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/26/2009 12:39:00 PM)


    the words they say hurt,
    life burns, ..... u did not specify why it hurts. but if it love failure.... very good compostiion of wrods and good write...10

    read mine ': Si(she) may go.... u will like it
    (Report) Reply

  • (6/25/2009 5:48:00 PM)


    i love it you have so mcuh emotion and thanks for your comments (Report) Reply

  • (6/21/2009 12:09:00 AM)


    i didnt know what to think after reading the title but i think this was a GREAT piece. i really like the way you ended it. (Report) Reply

  • (6/18/2009 6:03:00 PM)


    Alicia,
    very good write, you certainly make the reader 'FEEL' you are an exceptional writer.
    Barbie
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  • Shekhar Joshi (6/18/2009 2:21:00 PM)


    good one.........most emo's can look at you for inspiration..........you are excellent and determined...........

    excellent piece
    (Report) Reply

  • (6/18/2009 8:42:00 AM)


    i don't know what it feels like to go through that but you gave me a better understanding of what people who deal with it go through. Great Poem! (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (6/18/2009 1:58:00 AM)


    Nice and touchy also (Report) Reply

  • (6/18/2009 1:50:00 AM)


    epressions haunts your dreams..don't just surrender without cause..let it go, but stay here..grace (Report) Reply

  • (6/18/2009 1:32:00 AM)


    where did you go? ......... ph got a good poem and from you expecting a lot..... well penned........ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 18, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, June 26, 2009


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