Let Love Be Innocent Comments

Let us life's balance restore, Life has swung the other shore; Let attachment to body retrieve, Let us spiritual fiber reweave. Rachel Ann Butler

this is such a wonderful poem. I truly enjoyed it lovely flow of rhyming words. ~ Hazel G.E

let us all go back to basic of love........there lies the true hapiness and satisfaction of our soul........................thanks..great one huh.

Interesting and difficult rhyme scheme depicting an ancient ritual called love, as seen through modern eyes. Good job.

Beautifully rhymed and so very true 'we have lost our natural grace' as a human race - - the final lines contatin appeal too..... kindest wishes from Fay.

Classic story in a classic rhymed pure form, wise and worthy to be read; wisdom in kind of parabel form, accessible for all. I like it very much! Regards, one

True love is always soul deep. Your last stanza is your most memorable stanza.. Praise for your noble pen. Warm regards, Sandra

a poem filled with noble thoughts if followed will definitely lead to higher realms of life

Worthy poem to appreciate today! Man lives like an animal enjoying animal pleasure after working as machine among machines. Love should start from the heart! He is like a puppet on string says I Love You and does all without real love. That is the great flaw in man's nature now! Wonderful poem to read!