Coreena Dejesus

Rookie (May 9,1984 / USA (Born in MA) (Raised in MI))

Let Me Be Free - Poem by Coreena Dejesus

I hate you and your control
here take it, take my soul
You never loved me or cared
now i'll never be repaired
tears streaming down my face
masking my lonely disgrace
If only the world knew
Or even had a preview
They would understand why
Why I completely snapped
And failed to adapt
It really isn't my fault
It was the constant assault
Upon my feelings and emotions
so just take your love
and shove it up your ass
You took everything from me
now just let me be free.


Comments about Let Me Be Free by Coreena Dejesus

  • K. V. Venkataramana (9/12/2017 5:43:00 AM)


    Poem with powerful feelings of injustice meted out to poor soul! Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • (8/26/2009 5:38:00 PM)


    definitely know how you feel....its good to let it out in any form.....anger shouldn't be left to simply build and build.....and its good to get out of relations like that.....
    nice :)
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  • Saadat Tahir (4/26/2009 2:17:00 PM)


    rebellious pent up anger well expressed
    some has to rise to the occasion

    nice lines...even with the expletives
    cheers
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  • (3/8/2008 12:29:00 AM)


    Yes. That is what lots of us have meant to say but didn't. Good one. A ten. Sincerely, Connie Webb (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 31, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 21, 2011


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