11/09/2007 Forgive Your Self Poem by Coreena Dejesus

11/09/2007 Forgive Your Self

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I am no perfect person this is true,
What I’ve done is only known by a few,
My dirty little secrets not for public use,
All I can say is sorry I have no excuse.

I do not steal this I can say,
I have done things that betray.
The ones I love I hold very close,
But there the ones I’ve hurt most.

My life isn’t over it’s just begun,
I can’t change the things I’ve already done.
Learn from my mistakes and change my ways,
I know how I want to spend the rest of my days.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Katie P 09 March 2008

great poem! ! i absolutely love it!

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 09 March 2008

no one is perfect, great poem

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Miss tee 06 March 2008

good rhythm, and great ideas expressed - its a very nice mentality :)

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Jemarie Ragudo 10 November 2007

I like poems with values like this. And the rhyme is good. You're a promising poet.

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Justine Keaton 10 November 2007

Mistakes are life lessons and if we learn from them than they are no longer mistakes. Nice poem. ~Justine~

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Coreena Dejesus

Coreena Dejesus

USA (Born in MA) (Raised in MI)
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