Coreena Dejesus

♥ 03/04/2008 B Crying Because I Love ♥

When we are over were not over I'll be your friend,
Sorry that our passionate love didn't last till the end,
I still love you so very much this is so true,
I could have spent every moment of my life with you.

I imagined my self having your child,
A precious little baby that looked up and smiled.
To live our lifes till death did us part,
But it won't happen doomed from the start.

It hurts that I know this chapter of us will close,
I hate to say it but we weren't meant for each other, I suppose.
The pain that I feel the tears brought by you,
Your lies broke me down, lies more than a few.

I gave you so many chances and so much time,
My tears falling writing - typing every line!
I will always love you and if you ever need me I'll be there,
What I had with you no one could compare.

March 2008 - (Dedicated to Vernon Burchett)

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 4, 2008
Poem Edited: Monday, July 13, 2009

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  • Afzal Shauq (1/9/2010 9:36:00 PM)

    awesome..lovely and professinally written piece.great task...10/10

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  • Siddharth Singh (7/18/2009 8:39:00 AM)

    As a reader i can hear
    the poet's heart cry.
    Very nice.

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  • Rani Turton (7/14/2009 4:10:00 AM)

    Sweet and sad, Coreena. A wonderful poignant read.

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  • Michael K (4/10/2008 4:18:00 PM)

    Coreena,

    I know this pain very well.....another beautiful poem.....sad but very beautiful.

    Thank you!

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  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (3/16/2008 3:08:00 AM)

    yet poignant love as when wistful
    lost to plume by the reeks of rankling
    as reasons to reason by the hearts when hold
    as love when tweaked being rilled upon.............most painful sorrow on the other side...........well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

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  • PERSIAN NIGHTINGALEPERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (3/15/2008 4:32:00 AM)

    so heartfelt and beautiful, thanks for sharing

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  • Andrew mark Wilkinson (3/11/2008 7:16:00 AM)

    Poetry that is so sad, some guys don't know the wonderful things we have.. Andy 10

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  • Lesley Bass (3/8/2008 7:19:00 AM)

    wow i love that peom but very sad still: '(

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  • Sreelekha Premjit (3/8/2008 4:37:00 AM)

    A lot of pain comes with love. Sad but true. You said it so beautifully.

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  • Frostie Lisette (3/6/2008 7:00:00 PM)

    This means a lot i knowhowthis is like its quite sad and ur a very unique writer

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  • Original Unknown Girl (3/6/2008 4:30:00 AM)

    this is so sad, you can sense the emotions are flowing like a river in this poem. I hope you find happiness with someone else who's meant to give you all the things you mentioned herein. HG: -) xx

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  • Tara very irritated with PH injustice (3/6/2008 1:44:00 AM)

    I know this feeling.... heartfelt. t x

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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (3/6/2008 12:54:00 AM)

    u have a heart of a true lover.....i liked it

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  • Vidyadhar ... (3/5/2008 5:51:00 PM)

    nice one from the depth of the heart

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