Let Me Bear Some Pain Poem by sagar patil.

Let Me Bear Some Pain

Rating: 4.5


let me bear some pain..
let me remain alive from within
my eye will turn dull
let some tears fall

i have smile on lips
eye in wetness and
the ground of my heart
somewhat wet i have
everything today...
but still i cant overcome ur absence
at least in my sleep
in dreams
let me sleep in your arms

let me bear some pain..
let me remain alive from within
my eye will turn dull
let some tears fall

your face, you grace
your talks, yours feelings
the beautiful moment that
i had spend with you
& the morning & evening
let them be mine for sometime
my love!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i fall in depression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Brookes 10 May 2013

A beautiful poem full of emotion and warmth through the pain. You have a gift enabling you to communicate true feeling. Thanks for sharing BB : O)

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Poetheart Morgan 24 August 2012

Such pain! ! ! Oh! ! ! Beautiful! ! !

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Neela Nath Das 22 August 2012

Very romantic, heart-touching poem.

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Rupika Alekhya 22 August 2012

Very nice poem. Way to go.

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sagar patil.

sagar patil.

maharashtra, india
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