sagar patil.

Rookie - 2 Points (03/06/1990 / maharashtra, india)

Now Its In Front Of Me - Poem by sagar patil.

still somewhere inside me.
there is a little like remaining
a new heartbeat came up
i got to know that i am still alive
some such tenacity
is there in this moment...
where was this moment of mine

now its in front of me.
should i do or should i live little..
should i kiss joys...
or should i cry a little..
should i die or should i live little..

the body burning down in the sun.
got the shade of a tree.
like the smile an angry kid
come back on a little cajoling..
something like that is what my heart
is feelings...

on the year old would there is a applied
some such mercy is there in this moment
where was this moment of mine..

like a kite with broken string
was this life of mine..
today i m here whatever tomorrow
takes place or not known
was my story everyday...
mow a new bond calls me from behind..
why does a worry for tomorrow trouble me.
such a prickle is there in this moment.
where was this moment of mine...

now its in front of me.
should i do or should i live little..
should i kiss joys...
or should i cry a little..
should i die or should i live little..

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Comments about Now Its In Front Of Me by sagar patil.

  • (12/4/2012 9:27:00 AM)

    should I die or should I live a little
    sometimes in life we find ourselves contemplating something like this. Whatever happens, just keep finding a reason to live a little...just live anyway
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  • (10/12/2012 2:00:00 PM)

    its wonderful. i like the way you put your thoughts into words :)) (Report) Reply

  • (10/12/2012 1:24:00 PM)

    I like it :) nice one. Waiting to read more. Thank u. (Report) Reply

  • Cierrah Smiles (10/9/2012 6:51:00 PM)

    Everybody has chooses they must make... they face these choices and live with the outcome but either way you go you still must live with the choose...
    now its in front of me.
    should i do or should i live little..
    should i kiss joys...
    or should i cry a little..
    should i die or should i live little..
    Are my fav. lines. I love this poem great work
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  • (10/9/2012 1:36:00 PM)

    At every turn in our lives we have to make a choice. What we are is the result of our past choices. At present the choice before us is either to look back and weep or to look forward and smile at the new horizons open for us. The first choice will make us philosopher- poets and the second will make you us optimist. Anyway nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (10/9/2012 5:12:00 AM)

    Good poem, you did a nice job here..what to face in front of you? ? i have a suggestion, try to learn by seeing a layer of water, a thin surface cover the ocean or the lake...a surface that facing air or can decide to diffuse to be in the air or stay in the pool of water reservoir, there always a choice we need to take in this life sagar, each will cost you something, if you go to the air, you must lost the water, if you stay to the water then you can reach the sky and the air above...but now you are in a layer of water, decide what you want and whatever you decide it do it without regret, just try make it work and it will...thanks for inviting, keep writing_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Asif Andalib (10/7/2012 9:56:00 AM)

    Life is mixture of sorrow and happiness so go ahead and live a long life. Good poem (Report) Reply

  • (10/6/2012 8:31:00 AM)

    you want something everyday but you know when your heart wants something and i think you should always grab it
    cause today what matters no yesterday nor amazing piece sir a heartfelt melody to ear

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  • (10/5/2012 12:54:00 PM)

    Smart way of expressing you feelings; and thoughts, nice writting go on man. (Report) Reply

  • (10/5/2012 11:33:00 AM)

    kiss joy of course!
    lovely write bhaiya :)
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  • Poetheart Morgan (10/5/2012 8:02:00 AM)

    Please Sagar, life, kiss, joy and pain, all make part of ours lifes. Make a option for you love. Beautiful Poem. In War and love worth everything.Go ahead. (Report) Reply

  • Mg Confused (10/5/2012 6:50:00 AM)

    u should have little...
    i think this question is now a days common for every person.
    nyc poem
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  • Neela Nath Das (10/5/2012 6:06:00 AM)

    Dilemma of thought. What to do, to embrace new life or to stick to past grief--this is the thought, I think.Very nice. (Report) Reply

  • (10/5/2012 4:42:00 AM)

    In every moment of our lives we are called upon to make choices. What we are and what we stand for is the result of our choices. No repents. One has to take every day as it comes to him, but one has to plan for eternity forgetting the subtle and material things of life. Nice flow of thoughts. (Report) Reply

  • Indranil Bhaduri (10/5/2012 4:32:00 AM)

    Very thoughtful piece...Liked it... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 5, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, October 5, 2012

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