when your soul is lost
and it cries out for help
if no one tries to save you
do they still care
and if you cry a thousand tears
and are drowning in your sorrow
and no one notices
are you still there
and if i decided not to stay
but to leave this place
if i tried to run
would you stop me
would you let me go
would you chase me
to the ends of the earth
would you find me
and if at your last touch i
shattered like glass
would you stay
to pick up the pieces
and if i was gone would
would you forget me
and would you try to
iron me awat with the creases
will you ever let me go.............
Beautifully written. You threw me a bit at the end with the twist but it was a good effect. Esra Sloblock
by the way the poem goes, it is you who doesnt want to let go of him... anyways, nice piece here.. goodluck on your lovelife =)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful. Lala when let go the attachments the soul will be more free?