Let Me Leave Poem by Vignesh Ravishankar Shanmugam
Let Me Leave
Let me leave,
Leave to make our lives blissful,
Blissful, the way we experienced,
Experienced too, the uncanny moments,
Moments that will soon fade away.
Let me leave,
Leave for awhile in misery,
Misery that you been inflicted,
Inflicted by me but unintentional,
Unintentional as seem, might-have-been averted.
Let me leave,
Leave to face the odds of the world,
World, I never thought beyond your warmth,
Warmth not felt by the forsaken,
Forsaken as of now without you.
Let me leave,
Leave you far in a locus,
Locus that been separated by distance,
Distance not between souls, lone by time,
Time will melt away when I come for you.
Let me leave...........and live with you.Whatta piece.
I have never read a poem such as the way you have written this one.... truly inspiring....10!
Very good writing, displaying great potential. Fine stanzaic pattern.10
great...very uniquely written..SO interesting... originally from you... i like the style of repitition of word...great share...
Wow! Excellent poetic form of writin...wonderful poem specially th ending ws awesome... Lov th way u write..10++++
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I would like to translate this poem
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leaving to a distance leaving the soul behind...emotions well expressed...impressive write, Vignesh...keep posting poems...10