Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi


Let Me Remove The Obstacles For You To Climb.. - Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

When we think that we are at the top of the hill,
Those who are at the tip of the mountain say,
'Hi, you are at the bottom of us.'
Then we realize that we have a long way to go!

Not an easy task to climb these terrains,
Where all obstacles pave our way.
Not an unaccomplished act to leave in vain,
When thousands made their hay.

When focus the top, the pain may vanish,
we may enjoy the journey, not that smooth.
When we imagine the victory,
we may enjoy the pain for its glory.

Do not give up half way for the fear of falling down,
as the falling is normal on earth's gravity.
Even it is for a few moments of our life,
Let us strive to achieve what little that we can.


Comments about Let Me Remove The Obstacles For You To Climb.. by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

  • (12/23/2011 7:32:00 PM)


    Dear veeraiyah subbulakshmi,
    I read your poem ' Let me remove the obstacles for you to climb..' It is wonderful to know how to remove the obstacles and achieve what little that we can. Greetings to you.
    Dr.V.K.Kanniappan
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  • Vipins Puthooran (12/22/2011 7:08:00 AM)


    The way to His land is narrow and thorny! !
    a good poem! !
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 22, 2011



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