Let That Be Shown Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Let That Be Shown

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Let that be shown as resolve
With noble acts to solve
And at the same time
Act honest for all the time

What can be best tribute?
To creator and attribute
All sincere prayers
In acts with no failures

So when you see almighty
You will never want to be seen with pity
But with perfect satisfaction
Of your own action

You did nothing wrong
And so you can sin in his praise with song
With clear heart and belonging
That was life you were simply gong

Reassure him of your good intent
In best manner speak out and present
That you need no favor
But blessings to lead with honor

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 August 2013

feels like a prayer from the heart anthony fowler11 minutes ago very personal, as if it were a private conversation Comment +1 Good message

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 August 2013

Scott Moulthrop14 minutes ago Live your life so you have no shame. An impossible quest? Some grammatical issues detract.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 August 2013

Let that be shown as resolve With noble acts to solve

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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