Adolf Baloyi

Freshman - 828 Points (16/07/1980)

Let The Sun Rise - Poem by Adolf Baloyi

Let love be, you unsolicited traveller
For you have fallen and tastes the gates of hades
Beware the prince of darkness declares war with love
Let love be, you tailed, horned being.

Let it be, for it soothes the hearts of men, women, kids and all
Pure hearts make home for ever-lasting love
Let love be, for it hovered around the surfaces of the earth in search of you and I
Behold ruthless hearts declares war with love
Minds wandered looking for love, let love be

Oh' you cold-hearted being, let the sun rise
Those trapped in your nest inherit nothing but mortality
How you poured the spirit of hatred in their minds
Filled their hearts with adulterous practices

Love, love indefinitely, love expect but nothing
For in love all is fulfilled
He is a unifier, hope and all to the universe
God is love for he loved us all, risen against death, so will you and I

Topic(s) of this poem: praise

Form: Lament


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Life's observation

Comments about Let The Sun Rise by Adolf Baloyi

  • Chinedu DikeChinedu Dike (11/14/2019 5:46:00 PM)

    A fine and lofty verse written with clarity of thought and mind. A beautiful work of art nicely penned with spiritual insight. Remain enriched, bro. (Report)Reply

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  • Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (7/4/2017 9:53:00 AM)

    Let the sun rise for love and great thoughts in this poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Tom Allport (6/30/2017 8:37:00 AM)

    a wonderful poem that sends out a strong lovely message? ...................well written. (Report)Reply

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  • Adolf BaloyiAdolf Baloyi (6/28/2017 4:52:00 AM)

    Thanks chief....hope you enjoyed it (Report)Reply

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  • G. Akanji OlaniyiG. Akanji Olaniyi (6/27/2017 3:15:00 AM)

    lovely write and good composition (Report)Reply

    Adolf BaloyiAdolf Baloyi(7/14/2017 2:26:00 AM)

    Ngiyabonga'. thanks a million times

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 26, 2017

Poem Edited: Friday, July 14, 2017


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