Let Us Come Near Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Let Us Come Near

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You can be dream cum reality
As it is with you in form of quality
Rarely seen in friendly exposure
I see clear picture for future

I see good soul
With sincere call
I flatly go after her
I would love if she rests on my shoulder

You are housed in box
A sacred one to toss
I hope it to be energizer
She must be on my side as sympathizer

To feel is not to touch
The feeling is as such
Distance does not separate
When you are honest to relate

It can turn into real things
More real than something
Not dreamed so far
Even if you are in sky like star

I would love to say
Do not go away
Whether it is real or unreal
Try to stay with me and heal

Let us come closer
Not as good poser
But real one and act
That shall be real dream in fact

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 November 2013

I would love to say Do not go away Whether it is real or unreal Try to stay with me and heal Ramesh Rai3 minutes ago A healing write.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 November 2013

Good job Katie Spitzer12 minutes ago Well done! I enjoyed the imagery and the journey Comment +1 touching

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 November 2013

Anthony Brown14 minutes ago this poem is so moving and very much the way i feel about a mate if i could find one for myself Comment +1 enjoyable

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 November 2013

Amy Wilbee15 minutes ago good write

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 November 2013

We are non violent Totally absent

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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