Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 464,818 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Let Us Fulfill - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I feel exiled
From motherland for while
The blame war is on
The golden days are gone

Why such change?
All of sudden without seasonal change
What has happened to people?
Rape and murder that opposes or struggles?

Day time murder of political leaders
No trace of single offender
The system has broken down
The corruption is largely known

Find no light in summer
The patients only suffer
The children and old people seem helpless
Where is good governance?

Justice takes years
Normal men fear
When will they get reprieve?
Everybody feels deprived

Let us fulfill their dream
Provide two times meal
Let us not use words that are overstated
Poor people should not feel being cheated

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Comments about Let Us Fulfill by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/10/2014 7:47:00 PM)

    Golden days are gone..... Don't give up, they will come again
    10 Jun by Seema Chowdhury to Let us fulfill
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/10/2014 9:32:00 AM)

    Very strong

    Mary Musick21 minutes ago
    The poem is very strong. I can feel the aggravation and want. Good Job.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/10/2014 9:32:00 AM)

    well written

    trevor headley20 minutes ago
    A very good insight into the problems of today
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/10/2014 9:32:00 AM)

    Government corruption and the frustration of how many people deserve more.

    Lindsay Hetrick18 minutes ago
    It had a good tone and ring to it, I like the cadence. Careful to not rhyme like words (ie change and change)
    The subject matter is an interesting one, however I feel more depth can be added.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/10/2014 9:31:00 AM)


    Dez Marius17 minutes ago
    very inspiring
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/10/2014 9:03:00 AM)

    I feel exiled
    From motherland for while
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 10, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 10, 2014

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