Saturday, November 8, 2014

Let's Try Again Comments

Rating: 5.0

Crying till the tears run out,
Chasing many broken dreams,
Wondering what it's all about,
Life is never what it seems.
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Jayne Louise Davies
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Jayne Davies 23 November 2014

Thanks again Roseann, so pleased you like it! x

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Roseann Shawiak 21 November 2014

Jayne, I really love this poem, it just grabs your attention from the first line and takes you along the pathway of reality, weaving it's storyline. Then leaves one with a memory to hold on to through life giving a kind of passive strength. The last line was perfect, Deep breath now, let's try again. It says to me you've found the courage to move forward. Really great poem! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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