Let's Try Again Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Let's Try Again

Rating: 5.0


Crying till the tears run out,
Chasing many broken dreams,
Wondering what it's all about,
Life is never what it seems.

Gazing at a star filled sky,
Wondering if you feel my pain,
Hoping you can hear me now,
Maybe I can smile again.

Missing days we shared back then,
Looking for a steady hand,
You were always there for me,
Life can never go as planned.

Walking through the meadows Green,
Wishing you were here with me,
Sounds of nature fill the air,
Memories are so dear to me.

Waking to a brand new morn,
Must let go of days back then,
Find the strength to carry on,
Deep breath now, let's try again.

Jayne Davies

Saturday, November 8, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayne Davies 23 November 2014

Thanks again Roseann, so pleased you like it! x

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Roseann Shawiak 21 November 2014

Jayne, I really love this poem, it just grabs your attention from the first line and takes you along the pathway of reality, weaving it's storyline. Then leaves one with a memory to hold on to through life giving a kind of passive strength. The last line was perfect, Deep breath now, let's try again. It says to me you've found the courage to move forward. Really great poem! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Jayne Louise Davies

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Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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