Aden Orie


Life - Poem by Aden Orie

Not careing
brings me to the deapths of my dispair
life isnt fair
i do not remeber choosing to live
i do not remember choosing to be placed in a world with sin
to in the end be rewarded
why couldnt i have been nothing
in the darkest depths that seize to be
depths of my dispair
life isnt fair
god i try and i try
when will you speak to me with your voice
when will i get to see your face
so long to go and its been so long
life is what we make it
thats what they say
god im running out of words
i pray and i pray.


Comments about Life by Aden Orie

  • Matt MooneyMatt Mooney (10/7/2011 5:55:00 PM)

    'From trailing clouds of glory do we come, from God who is our home'(Wordsworth) .
    Your last four lines are very powerful.
    Our Lady Queen of Peace, appearing in Medugorje, has told us to 'Pray, Pray, Pray.'
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  • Dave Walker (10/7/2011 5:02:00 PM)

    I like your style in this poem.
    Very good
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 23, 2011



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