Die With Me. Poem by Aden Orie
Die With Me.
Forever,
Is such a long time, time to waste, time that’s going no matter what
The facts of life are that people die
But alone, not I
I need your warm breath gracefully blowing on my shoulder
I need another walk to remember
Another time that I can look back on
A fulfilled dream just upon
Memories
I can have them with you
And I want you to
Die,
With me
It reminds me about the manga I read. 'Chicago' by Tamura Yumi. One of the character suits the poem very well. He will take his girl with him (to die) even if she won't. It makes his partner feels jealous and think to leave him just die so the girl will cry. It just some great scene beside the whole great story. Hope you can read it to.
very deep meaning, die with me - I like to take the one I love with me wherever I may be on this earth - would i take her with me in the hereafter? don't know, that's not up to me. All I know is I'll see her when we both get there and we'll be in eternal bliss. this is a great poem, philosophical, deel, deep, deep.
very deep... and almost dark... but heres a thought on that. whether they die with you, or not... taking your memories of them and their love with you to the other side is like having them there with you... in a way right?
Beautiful poem! exactly what i feel everyday! you completely capture what so many people are searching for in their lives great job Aden :) ~Bella
' I can have them with you And I want you to Die, With me ' alot feelings in this words, very nice poem, welldone my friend, wish u all the best
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Really touching. That's really deep and amazing. your friend, panda