Life Poem by Thilagavathy Swamy

Life

Rating: 5.0


My life was full of thorns
and i grown and struggled in horns
to see a life full of harms
i prayed god to relieve me from the swines
and at last i reaped the pines

Life
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Something like hurting the heart, but nice one. Thank you mam.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 April 2016

Beautiful with the eyes of peace. Thanks for sharing.

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An inspiring write-thanks

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Thank u for reviewing.

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Sridevi Thirunavukkarasu 26 March 2016

good.life is so pain but we can take it is easy if possible. nice

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Thank u for reviewing and advising my friend. U r great.

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 20 March 2016

Very gud attempt, nice emotions, simple but lots of insight, keep rocking like to vote 10

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Thank u dear

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