Life Poem by Jodilee Duke

Life

Rating: 5.0


i can't feel me without you
inside you are, inside all of me
there is not side stepping
there is not even an excuse
my chest half full with breath
waiting for you to complete
i can't do it without you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jun Insigne 23 July 2008

meaningful Poem, d best one, honesty is there inside, good writing, , , , , thanks

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Javier Falcon 20 July 2008

Actually pretty good, I like the ambiguous feel to it, good write...

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