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Jun Insigne Poems

1.
Benevolence

Oftentimes there are things that we want to achieve,
Thinking that our world’s immortal
But through the years that pass by,
Radiant morning rays await us.
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2.
I Love You With All I Am

My love for you has brought me out of me.
The beauty in your heart has set me free
For all my inaccuracy;
I looked into my heart and saw a treasure
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3.
The Traveler

The way seemed too attractive so I go
The other way is dense and they were few
I walk into the path I wanted to
But, I realized that I walk away from you
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4.
Pagmamahal (Benevolence)

Minsan may mga bagay na nais nating makamtan
Akala natin mundo ay wala ng katapusan
Ngunit sa pag-ikot nito doon natin makikita
May naghihintay pala na isang magandang umaga.
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5.
Winter Moonlight

The snow, so peaceful and serene,
caressed by the soft moonlight,
gave magical feelings to the night...
...

Jun Insigne Comments

Francisco R. Albano 29 July 2008

This statemental poem is good. Revise and remove grammatical and syntactical errors. Republisb. 1st stanza line 4. Remove 'A'. 3rd stanza line 1. Remove 'to'. line 3. Change 'bliss' to 'blissful.' line 5. 'Coz' is baduy. Change to 'Because.' 4th stnza line 1. Change 'cause' to 'causes' (singular) 5th stanza is unintelligiblr because syntax is wrong. Revise last two lines.

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