Love Poem by Jodilee Duke

Love

Rating: 5.0


there's this feeling in me,
one that comes up from my feet..
it always has this fast contain'd beat...
not sure of its origin,
yet i know its got meaning...
it never comes in the same way twice,
but always feeling full and nice.
one that enter's yet holds a vast amount
released from the middle-core
down deep it creeps, rises in fire's heat
modifies land, as it reaches with stern hands
then drops
returning
happy with burnt, cause of self taught
back now from where it came
song's birth
i would say covering the sky blue,
but here
just sounds which ring true
i love u
i love u
said the world
you've giving me a song, the song of you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jun Insigne 21 July 2008

very nice poem-thanks

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Dark Soul 02 March 2008

I believe that love is what you are, i really enjoyed your poem well done Jodi Thanks and love you D.S

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