Life Deserted From Love Poem by Amitava Sur

Life Deserted From Love

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My friends -
How far can you realize the bite of sorrows and strife?
To what extent did you lose your love from your life?
How much have you truly lost your love from your heart and mind?
Did you really lose your love quite untimely?
Can you think of a situation of being without your love
Whom you love the best and nearest to your heart?
And henceforth, you will not be able to see your love anymore?


Then only you can realize the extent of parting pain
And you will feel the extent of emptiness in your heart.
You also will find as how the whole house in your mind
Is slowly decaying and breaking into innumerable pieces.

Whole story of your life will be ended then and there
Leaving some remains of a grave yard’s dust in your mind,
Without the existence of any love in your life
It will be so colorless, tasteless and a vegetable like.

A life without love is nothing but a corpse or a clone.
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Amitava (18.5.2015) 6-30 am

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Life Deserted From Love
Friday, June 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: grief
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 06 October 2015

The bite of sorrows and strife! ! Sad; but, let us always get hope to look ahead. Nice work.

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Roseann Shawiak 19 June 2015

This poem explains life so perfectly when you lose your love forever, the excruciating pain, emptiness, sheer agony of losing your loved one. How life decays and falls from your arms into nothingness. Leaving some remains of a grave yard's dust in your mind is poignantly etched in my mind. It reminds me of a line in my poem, Life's Black Curtains - Walking away from our favorite places, I leave a little of self behind each time - soon there will be nothing left of me. Somehow your line reminded me of it. There is just no way of living in this emptiness, having lost your way it is difficult to begin life again alone. My heart holds yours within, little one. All I am able to do is BE here for you. That is not nearly enough for what you are going through though. Please keep writing you are speaking to all of our hearts when you do. Thank you, Amitava.

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