Saturday, December 5, 2015

Life - I'd Like To Go Back Comments

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I'd like to go back and do it all again
To see the people I loved and my friends
There would be no mistakes this time
And I would know which path to take just fine
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Paul Warren
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Shakil Ahmed 05 December 2015

So in the end to merely sit back in the fact Would mean less criticism in life's eternal tract- -Beautiful ending, nice work, thanks.

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Irvin Relebogile 05 December 2015

i know and most hate the feeling: its destructive presence can never change a thing.but hey, its a good poem: i love the rhyme.

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ADELAIDE, SOUTH AUSTRALIA
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