Friday, December 2, 2005

Life Is A Blessing Comments

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Whoever said life is a blessing,
Told a satanic lie!
You struggle
Until you die,
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Uriah Hamilton
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Powerful expression delivered with polished lexia...~FjR

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Ivy Christou 02 December 2005

Life is a blessing my friend but it is too buried Beneath decaying leaves.. go into that cemetery and dig it out! it is yours to take! ! Take care HBH

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Raynette Eitel 02 December 2005

Uriah, you need to move to a different spot where lilacs blloom gloriously and people smile back at you when you say 'good day.' You need to associate with peoople who truly believe life is a blessing and then act like it. Raynette

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Ulrike Gerbig 02 December 2005

a very beautiful painful poem. u.

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Joseph Daly 02 December 2005

I go along with Mary on this. You structure the work so well and place such wonderful lines where they are least expected. it almost makes you forget the theme. Brilliant all the same Uriah

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Mary Nagy 02 December 2005

Yes, you are in a dark mood huh Uriah? What I love about how you write is your ability to describe what seems to be the ''entire life'' of the subject in your poems. It's like we know them so well we could almost predict where they will go next or what they will do. Probably due to such wonderfully vivid images. (even if they're not ''pretty'') You're a pro Uriah. Sincerely, Mary

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