Thursday, May 23, 2019

Life Is A Tree Comments

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Lineage of a tree, so curious,
Íntention of my heart was entrapped,
Fear of my soul exalted
Evoking eager, for its ups and downs.
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Talha Naeem
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Jazib Kamalvi 24 May 2019

Write comment. Great start, Talha Naeem. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 24 May 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing, Talha.

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Butch Decatoria 24 May 2019

I Love ACROSTICS! Got a good one, wish it were personal, it seems to explain rather than enthrall. May be lack of emotional digging young poets forget to emote or evoke. But hey you’re published online now—a published poet who would of known it. Peace be with you.

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Talha Naeem

Talha Naeem

Mianwali, Pakistan
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