Life Long Endeavor Poem by Ray Hansell

Life Long Endeavor

Rating: 5.0


She said that she was nervous
As she had never been in love before
I told her maybe he could be
The one you want for evermore

I told her if she's lucky
She'll find the kind of man
That she'll want to share her life with
To love him all she can

I said, if God smiles on you
Your love will last forever
The life you live with the man you love
Will be a beautiful, life long endeavor


11-26-17/RjH

Sunday, November 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2017

While God smiles is breath love lasts forever is true. You have cleverness of nice expression. An interesting poem is very well penned.10

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