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Life On Ice

Rating: 4.5
A quest for emotional provender
leaves me guided by your North Star
into wilderness unmelcoming
to my hearth loving nature
Fathoming your emotions
a venture akin to ice fishing
even should we crack the surface
there may be no reward
no returning tug on frail lines
deployed into chill waters
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Brian Robbins 27 January 2008
Interesting insight regarding different emotional temperaments.
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Duncan Wyllie 09 January 2008
You write words into pictures and stories that are so beautiful 'You have learned to sentinel your fires securely sheltered from any storm While I wave candles in open air daring breezes to breach their flare' WOW! Now that's fine writing Love duncan X
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Beth L Adams 06 January 2008
Hi, Mary! I love your depth and consistent analogy in this piece. To compare love relationships between men and women with ice fishing is highly creative. Beautiful job! Have a wonderful day! Beth
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Speakno Evil 04 January 2008
Relationships, particularly man/woman one can get tricky. Good write.
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