Delwen Doyle

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Life Philosophy - Poem by Delwen Doyle

Silently surrendered, I slide
down the slippery slope
of dope and coke and
friends can become fiends with
fiery eyes and spies and lies
This tri-phet trip
has me loose & hip
...could be the 'E' has got me
feeling so fancy free! Man -
I just wanna... Love... everybody!
Not a bad way to be, if you
ask me.

Child soldiers, capitalist crooks,
wars & pain, written up in books!
Pedophile priests
Cult schools of thought
Psycho sick beasts
underage prosti-tots!

This corrupt society
clashes with my life philosophy!
Even if U say it's a worn cliche
I would have to disagree
'peace, love, & harmony'
Is the life I live for me
....that and a couple hits of E!


Comments about Life Philosophy by Delwen Doyle

  • (8/4/2009 1:04:00 PM)


    This corrupt society
    clashes with my life philosophy!
    Even if U say it's a worn cliche
    I would have to disagree
    'peace, love, & harmony'
    Is the life I live for me
    ....that and a couple hits of E!

    a reality based poem done with a very much poetic and impressive way..liked it..10/10
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  • (8/30/2008 7:32:00 PM)


    am i write in assuming that 'E' is like, coke or something.
    I am not so young and hip...
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  • (6/23/2008 4:49:00 PM)


    Well written...very clever phrases within ('prosti-tots') . Very good philosophy to live by!
    -Michael
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  • Vidyadhar Durgekar (6/11/2008 9:33:00 AM)


    Truth.........
    good poem
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  • (5/7/2008 10:44:00 AM)


    Its a nice start on a philosophy. It reminds me of me.

    GW62
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  • (4/15/2008 10:43:00 AM)


    This poem reads like a fast flowing stream, full of life, sparkling, vibrant, viscous, energetic, wild, wonderful. (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2008 4:26:00 PM)


    good Write! u had me thinking another positive way. (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2008 12:40:00 PM)


    A beutiful musical poem contrasting its own theme This is natural that our life philosophy can not match the system of society.So revolution is inevitable.We have to fight against the system to apply our philosophy practically.Good poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 13, 2008



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