it was the first day that i open my eyes, , ,
i saw everything is confusing
nothing was clear
i heard just some words that have no meaning for me
but everything typed in my memory
that i can use it after this
now it's just time to take, ,
not to give
but days passed, , and everything changed
i got friends, , fall in love
live a normal life! !
living to learn, , have a family
be a mother and then a grandmother
watching my little kids playing around me
get into the bed, , , , put my cover on me, ,
and die quietly
and this is the life, , who has no rhyme
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to me that life sounds like it rhymes very much. everything the way on imagines it to be, sad in a way that it acctually rhymes so much.
Yes, this is the cycle of the life, , , But there's no any problem that your poem doesn't rhyme.. :) keep it up...Merna
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
poems does not have to rhyme....even sometimes the rhyme impairs the message in the poem.........so it's not a must to rhyme the poem....this is better without rhyme......just keep focusing and develop your skills because you are talented....write your pen off! ! =)