Life To Keep Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Life To Keep

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I love each poetic thought
But not easily carried away or caught
I try to find out what has been missed out
Add fragrance to it and spell out

It helps me in two ways
Some of the lacuna naturally go away
Addition space is utilized
The poem is completely obliged

My comments are in verses
They are represented with equal force
I do not believe in "like" or yes
I point him out for something more to trace

This is helping for new poem to emerge
Keep bond and new link to forge
It is concept in line
But may look more holy and divine

Not all poets can do it
But to me it seems fit
I try to go deep
For freshness and life to keep

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Magic of process Tracy Bollinger9 hours ago How we all access the muse differently, the process itself subject of many poems. Wonderful! Comment +1

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Love it Poet Shi9 hours ago Inked with finesse Comment +1

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great use of rhyme, meter and verse! William Cobb9 hours ago great read! a poem that consistently flows through till delivery. well done!

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Like 9 hours ago by just Arun | Reply

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I love each poetic thought But not easily carried away or caught

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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