Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 517,937 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Life Together - Poem by Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

The beauty can never be explained
The separation has always pained
The human being always long for love
The bond and relation is always believed

Let us now compare outer show
With that of real beauty with glow
The face might present silvery lines
As that of moon in night

The teeth may shine
And make us to feel fine
We shall dream to have such person
On our side with various reasons

The real beauty lies with attachment
The girl cares for special moment
When hand is proposed for union
The best occasion to enjoy as companion

What role is played by personal nature?
I think inner feeling is reason for sure
When two souls come closer
And vow for spending life together

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Comments about Life Together by Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2015 2:48:00 AM)


    How very true. A fine statement on life together well put.


    Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad
    28 Aug,2015


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/27/2015 10:02:00 PM)


    The beauty can never be explained
    The separation has always pained
    The human being always long for love
    The bond and relation is always believed

    Let us now compare outer show
    With that of real beauty with glow
    The face might present silvery lines
    As that of moon in night

    The teeth may shine
    And make us to feel fine
    We shall dream to have such person
    On our side with various reasons

    The real beauty lies with attachment
    The girl cares for special moment
    When hand is proposed for union
    The best occasion to enjoy as companion

    What role is played by personal nature?
    I think inner feeling is reason for sure
    When two souls come closer
    And vow for spending life together
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 27, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, August 28, 2015


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