Tuesday, August 5, 2008

Lifeless Comments

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Here i am, another week, another day
Wondering, how some more of that time has slipped away.
Here i am, just a body, one among so many,
That is tossed upon the sands, like a nickle, like a penny.
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Sivan P.G Menon 05 August 2008

arpita.. the quest to define LIFE? begins the moment u' are cut off from the umblical chord.. an infinite path... I see the turmoil....the search..eternal... a reality of LIFE....in a good poetic mood..feel oneness with the..thought.. good write.. regards.. sivan..

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Tapas Baidya 05 August 2008

Why do I try so hard? Because, it is the life, it is the life and it is the life. Tapas Baidya, Kolkata

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William Rain Mountain 05 August 2008

This poem has lots of meaning to me! I like it! Thanks!

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