Lifeless Poem by LC Jose Deluna

Lifeless

Rating: 5.0


Without The Heart There Is No Mind
Without A Start There Is No End..
So Lets Begin The Quest With A Black Ball Pen
A Paper In Hand Where Thoughts Are Being Written In..
A Bin On My Side Throwing All My Crumblings
Thats Where My Emotions Are Falling In..
The Walls Of My Fear Are Caving In
Now My Confidence Is Listening
To Thos Eyes That Are Glistening
Telling Me That The Story's Ending Will Never Begin To Fill In..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emma Howey 08 July 2010

I luved it cause it desrcibes (in a way) how hopeless people feel. Hopefully that was what u where aiming for so if that is then it did its purpose.

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