Lift Your Voice Poem by Hannah Montana

'lift your voice' deep thought, thanks for sharing

not everyone thinks that way... but good poem.

its all so true.....

This is certainly the right idea and concept for poetry. The worst thing you can do in poetry is waste words. Poetry and music are much alike but rhyming is more strict in poetry. The sound should be identical but today poetry is allowing more of what I call 'false verse' rhyming. Yours is one of those. Some will mark down for it, others will not. The other thing is what Lily mentioned. A verse like this leaves a reader disappointed because you did not have two or three verses. Compare readers to an audience. They have certain expectations as well. This is like doing half or 1/3 of a song. It was an excellant verse just give them more . You can never give an audience too much of what they like . GW62

a very brief but straight- forward poem.. maybe could add more elements to make it more interesting... but overall, nice...