Like A Human Poem by Julia Luber

Like A Human

Rating: 5.0


I am wiped out by the hot sun suffocating me;
I feel swatted like a fly suffering, barely surviving-half killed-
desperately making my last nose dive at my wings working,
and they are, and they aren't, and I am not sure. And I
am not sure if I am a fly still or have evoluted into something
without wings, feeling like a human to walk on earth.

Wednesday, July 24, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: summer
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
How wiped out a hot day makes me feel despite that I have done nothing.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 25 July 2019

A well written poetic expression, dear Ma’am Julia...10++

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Julia Luber 25 July 2019

Thank you for reading and responding.!

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