Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 399,559 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Like Food - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

It seems you suffered
But never offered
Gloom picture
For coming future

It was vision
That kept no confusion
Life was to be moved on
He past had already gone

Not pain alone
That has gone
But agony too
No more with the blessings from almighty

One thing must be understood
And chewed like food
Life may face ups and down
That we have to own

Life can not be treated in isolation
You have nothing to bear in relation
It is mission granted to you
You have to face and prove true

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Comments about Like Food by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/31/2014 10:07:00 AM)

    It seems you suffered
    But never offered
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/31/2014 10:06:00 AM)

    Good flow

    Angel Plant6 minutes ago
    I enjoyed it. Well written. Good detail. Very true.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/31/2014 10:05:00 AM)


    kharon march4 minutes ago
    I enjoyed how you weaved this together. The metaphor was well understood.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/31/2014 10:04:00 AM)

    The secrets of life.

    Emmanuel Bandoh1 minute ago
    Life's experiences must be borne. There may be changes; but, basically, What you see is what you get. it is mission granted... the writer says.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/31/2014 10:04:00 AM)

    Juicy but bland

    Eusebius Clay5 minutes ago
    A filet mignon cooked perfectly: medium rare. Unfortunately, you forgot to add seasoning or salt. This is a valid artistic choice, but not to my taste.
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  • Gajanan Mishra (7/31/2014 9:22:00 AM)

    facing life let us say it is true, thanks, (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 31, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 31, 2014

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