Like It And Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Like It And

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Like it and
Wednesday, August 26,2020
6: 27 PM

How does "dislike" take place?
when some writers take a different course!
treat fellow poets as inferior
and sometimes don't respond altogether

they would love to be commented upon
and even appreciated
they respond with "thank you"
but nothing of poetical value to look through

they have formed tiny groups
with some favourable poets included in a troupe
they remain happy with their own dreamland
and see the greenery at the end

many the comments "like"
many with dry thanks
but no one gives full credit to the comment
it is lacked by the both, the readers and poets

you are heading nowhere
but insecurity is gripped with fear
some intelligent founders have opened certificate factory
with no calibre to judge the work literary

look at their biased attitude
they look nude
before the literary community
as they lack not only sincerity but integrity too

Dr. Jadia Hasmukh

Like It And
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deluke Muwanigwa 26 August 2020

A lot of truth there Sir. I try my best to give 2 cents worth. Yah i have noticed some people take offence. Thats why i did " A thousand apologies" . What a chance in a life time to lean the art by learning from others. I never knew there is a sonnet, limerick or acrostic anything until i joined PH. I have learned a lot and continue to learn. So lets lighten up and enjoy the cross polination of ideas and cultures. Thank you again Sir

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Ace Of Black Hearts 26 August 2020

Some do, some don't. Some are just looking for the one that fits them right. Perfection in how they relate. For me personally I only comment on those that I can find meaning within. At my own heart I begin. Lives lived with crossed paths to take. A moment to celebrate. An interesting inspirational poem, thanks for sharing.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2020

Poem: 59053514 - Like It And Member: Ace Of Black Hearts Comment: Some do, some don't. Some are just looking for the one that fits them right. Perfection in how they relate. For me personally I only comment on those that I can find meaning within. At my own heart I begin. Lives lived with crossed paths to take. A moment to celebrate.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2020

Poem: 59053514 - Like It And Member: Ace Of Black Hearts Comment: Some do, some don't. I only comment on those that I can find meaning within. At my own heart I begin. Lives lived with crossed paths to take. A moment to celebrate.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2020

Date & Time: 8/26/2020 11: 51: 00 AM Remove this comment Poem: 59053514 - Like It And Member: Deluke Muwanigwa Comment: I never knew there is a sonnet, limerick or acrostic anything until i joined PH. I have learned a lot and continue to learn. So lets lighten up and enjoy the cross polination of ideas and cultures. Thank you again Sir

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2020

Date & Time: 8/26/2020 11: 51: 00 AM Remove this comment Poem: 59053514 - Like It And Member: Deluke Muwanigwa Comment: A lot of truth there Sir. I try my best to give 2 cents worth. Yah i have noticed some people take offence. Thats why i did " A thousand apologies" . What a chance in a life time to lean the art by learning from others.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2020

before the literary community as they lack not only sincerity but integrity too Dr. Jadia Hasmukh

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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